I need to comprehend this before I can rewrite it to make it comprehensible, but a bunch of pronoun antecedents are currently ambiguous: "Tonra and Sabé had spent six weeks in Mos Espa as part of their cover to free slaves, but they were unaware that Tatooine already had an antislavery movement. By the time they learned, it was too late: they didn't trust them, as they had been trying to get in with local criminals." My best guess: "By the time [Tonra and Sabé] learned [of the existing movement], it was too late: [members of the existing movement] didn't trust [Tonra and Sabé], as [Tonra and Sabé] had been trying to get in with local criminals." Yes? No? Asithol (talk) 03:06, 29 March 2023 (UTC)
Like for Versé, I would like to propose that we add Tonra to the LGBTQ+ Individuals category. E.K. Johnston has specified in multiple Tweets (which are cited on this page as well as in WP:PRIDE) that she intended for Tonra to be bi- or pansexual. In the past, Wookieepedia has used authorial intent to "confirm" characters' queer identities. Therefore, I believe Johnston's Tweets should suffice for adding Tonra to the category. Queen Amiadala (talk) 23:07, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
I need to comprehend this before I can rewrite it to make it comprehensible, but a bunch of pronoun antecedents are currently ambiguous: "Tonra and Sabé had spent six weeks in Mos Espa as part of their cover to free slaves, but they were unaware that Tatooine already had an antislavery movement. By the time they learned, it was too late: they didn't trust them, as they had been trying to get in with local criminals." My best guess: "By the time [Tonra and Sabé] learned [of the existing movement], it was too late: [members of the existing movement] didn't trust [Tonra and Sabé], as [Tonra and Sabé] had been trying to get in with local criminals." Yes? No? Asithol (talk) 03:06, 29 March 2023 (UTC)